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Powerfull work. The image of being glossed in modern varnish captures the suffocation of societal expectations perfectly. That line about confusing cash with curency reminds me of conversations I had in college about what actually holds value. The acceptance of solitude at the end doesn't feel nihilistic tho, more like a necessary truth people avoid.

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Thanks so much for taking the time to comment in great detail. It is both helpful and appreciated. Lorenzo